Yeah, I know, this place is wack-
[No, wait, that stiffness, this isn't right. She pulls back, her face and some of her bangs soaked and stuck awkwardly to her face from mashing against his coat and she blinks big red-brown eyes up at him.]
Something's wrong.
[It's a question and a statement in one.]
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Yeah, I know, this place is wack-
[No, wait, that stiffness, this isn't right. She pulls back, her face and some of her bangs soaked and stuck awkwardly to her face from mashing against his coat and she blinks big red-brown eyes up at him.]
Something's wrong.
[It's a question and a statement in one.]